I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Monday, 2 September 2019
The dance
At my school we are learning a dance that is called Strip the Willow and it is very very fun. We also get to chose a partner for the dance and it is a traditional dance for scotland is well.
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Hi I didn't know it was called that and I'm Scottish!
ReplyDeleteHi Manase, I like how you explained the name of the dance and that it's a Scottish dance. I think you should say how to do the dance.
ReplyDeleteHi Manase I think you should mabey explain the dance a bit more.
ReplyDeletefirst impression all i learnt was that it's called strip the willow and you do it in partners. please could you add more detail
ReplyDeletesincerely
Jackson
p.s. it also says We also get to chose a partner for the dance and it is a traditional dance for scotland is well.
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Jackson
Hi Manase, I think you could of added alot more info but good
ReplyDeleteHey Manase, Maybe put a bit more information I didn't really know what it was
ReplyDeletelike your blog but what jess said: i like that you said the name and that it is scottish dance but i think more deatail is wanted.
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