Friday, 25 October 2019
a fun 4 days of school
at school we had a very fun teacher and his name was matua rocky and he lets us listen to music and play math games on our chromebook. we also got to play a game like cricket.
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Hi Manase, as soon as I see your writing I think you should have added way more sentences than just 2 sentences and you also need to add more punctuation. Other than that it's alright.
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